Fandom: Dragon Age 2
Pairing : Fenris/Anders
Warnings: Angst, some dub-con, hurt/comfort, past abuse & non-con
Title: Unsafe in Arms
What you are seeking critique on: All of it. I started it as a kmeme fill and just stalled out on it.
Notes: For the following kmeme prompt: Anders and Fenris have sex for the first time and Anders lets Fenris be the dom. It starts out well until Fenris gets so caught up in his memories of slavery that he gets harsh with Anders. Very harsh, to the point of bodily harm.
By the time he releases Anders the mage is absolutely terrified and runs (or limps) away. Afterwards he won’t even come near Fenris without another party member with him. Fenris regrets his actions and now has to find a way to apologize to Anders and get him back. Bonus Points: Concerned companions and fiercely protective!Hawke. Anders having memories of abuse at the Circle.
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Tumblr URL: http://cypheroftyr.tumblr.com
Fandoms you are in: Dragon Age Origins, Awakenings, Dragon Age 2
Fandoms you are familiar with: Same as above, Final Fantasy VII, VIII, FFX, Most fighting games, 24, Inception
Language(s) you are comfortable writing in/fluent in. (In case someone submits in a language other than English: English (Native speaker), some Japanese, some Spanish
Best way to contact you for concrit/review follow up: Tumblr Ask, or tdepass (at) gmail.com
Tumblr URL: ademska
Fandoms you are in: Dragon Age*, Mass Effect, Final Fantasy 1-12, Silent Hill, Metal Gear Solid, Ace Attorney, Sherlock Holmes (novels, Ritchie, BBC 2009), Inception, Avengers/Marvel
Fandoms you are familiar with: Most mainstream American television. Most mainstream videogame titles.
Language(s) you are comfortable writing in/fluent in. (In case someone submits in a language other than English: N/A.
AO3/FF.NET/Website: Archive of Our Own / FanFiction.Net
Best way to contact you for concrit/review follow up: via email - judehii[at]gmail[dot]com - or tumblr ask/submit.
Thank you ademska!
Please let people who want to review submitted works/offer concrit, can you please submit the following information:
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So, I am pondering whether allowing anon submissions and critique posts is a good idea.
People can submit their work without their name attached, and get concrit (hopefully) without any of the attachments of somone knowing you, or your work and worrying too much about personal feelings getting mixed up in the critique.
People can critique work anonymously as well. Taking the sting out getting hard but honest feedback from someone who you may know, whose work you respect, etc.
Those who are shy about putting their work out there can do so without their name attached.
You might want to remain anon if you are putting a piece up that is a kmeme fill.
The opportunity for people to be utter dicks to someone who is taking a chance on putting their work out there for review.
Opens a door to anon hate that I have zero fucking tolerance for, period.
Not everyone is comfortable with not knowing who is reviewing and critiquing their work and conversely some people might not like reviewing and critiquing work if they don’t know the name behind it.
Hello & welcome to the Tumblr concrit comm.
As things get rolling here, please read over the house rules, make a cup of your favorite drink & get your writing & crit caps on.
If you are interested in submitting work for critique; please use the submit a text post link and provide the following information:
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